I must make transitions from each paragraph and make a cohesive introduction to tie my paper together. I also must integrate the essay so it does not contradict itslef. I also must choose first or third person. I have to go over my essay and make my point crisp. I must figure out what question my essay is answering.
Fred, Nicole, Nicole-
How are you going to transition?
I am going to use phrases like as scene in above and this can be seen in the time magazine article. Or the internet can help people connect in many different ways as scene through...
Fred, Nicole-
Why did your paper contradict?
At one point I praise YouTube at others i strongly condemn it. May not necessarily be a contradiction or different facets of YouTube.
Nicole t-
How will you choose first or third person?
I will use third person because a majority of my essay is in third person.
Nicole D-
What do you mean figure out what the question is asking?
Go through my essay and see which direction it has gone in and what the essay is trying to say.
Fred-
Why does your intro have to change?
I must incorperate all the different themes of my essay.
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